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lovelissa
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I LOVE TO WRITE ..... DO U THINK I AM GOOD

Post by lovelissa » Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:54 am

MY LOVE FOR YOU

A few words cannot describe
how much I care for you.
I think about you day and night
how we can make it through.I remember how we met one day,
Just one look you blew me away.
I think it was young love at first sight,
Since I cry for nothing sometimes at night.
We've been through a lot in our relationship.
I'm afraid, I'm scared...I don't know what to do.
I try not thinking about it to hard....
But the thought of losing you.
You're the one I really love
the one I can't stop thinking of.
I never knew how love really felt,
As soon as you made my precious heart melt.
I'm sitting here trying to figure out things,
I don't know what has gotten into me.
But the day I first laid eyes on you,
I know that our love is simply true.

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prasanna
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Location: DUBAI, Los Angeles, Chennai

Post by prasanna » Thu Dec 11, 2008 5:20 am

Very good poem on love. U can write more poems , nice, keep on writing.


with best wishes,

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