Places Out Of Time

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Crow
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Places Out Of Time

Post by Crow » Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:38 pm

Just a Dream
Where I was surrounded by black marble
Water flowed to the left and to the right
The walkway was narrow
I thought I would fall
The illusion of the depth unknown
At the end of the walk
Greeting me with a smile
An Elder with a Silver Beard
Took my hand and walked me through the door
Saying I've been waiting for you

I was just a teen when I had this dream
Years I search for the place and time
So vivid in my mind
I remember places out of time

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Post by FairyQueen » Wed Jun 23, 2010 11:53 am

Good one

You are may be in search of loving and caring folks
Listen to carefully since as I hardly make jokes.


Sorry dear for such a funnily rhymed answer but your one is really good.

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Post by Crow » Sat Jun 26, 2010 6:08 am

Fairyqueen,

I thank you for your kind words.  It is true, they were very kind folks.  I just don't think it exists anymore.  I've looked all over the internet and cannot find a place that is described.  Past live perhaps, or another plane.  Again thanks for your kindness. :)

Safe Journey

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